ext_2445 ([identity profile] crickets.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] slybrunette 2008-07-25 10:17 pm (UTC)

oh, clever!

Speaking of knocking you off the edge of your seat! Holy mac & cheese that ending!

I love it. It's depressing alright, you weren't kidding about that, but man! Poor Claire! Poor Sawyer! Poor everyone!

And I have to say you've written this so well. Until that last bit, I had no idea where this was going. Even with the mention of how nobody notices her, but they do notice Sawyer. Very, very well-played. Clever and awesome!

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