ext_67229 ([identity profile] citron-presse.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] slybrunette 2009-04-21 10:21 am (UTC)

Awesome, elegant writing.

I love Mark and Derek's friendship - there's so much potential for exploration there; it would be nice if we could see some on the show - and you captured their dynamic beautifully. I also really liked your characterization of Mark here. As [livejournal.com profile] labil said, you found a balance between Mark as he has been for most of his adult life and the changes brought about with Lexie in a way that felt very real. Lovely work.

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