I like Owen as a character, it's just difficult to be pleased because it isn't a pleasing situation. Well, for the most part, I need feedback because otherwise I feel like I've done something wrong. I'm needy like that, lol. But I write characters as I perceive them, which could really get me into trouble, I suppose. If you can suggest to me the best way to right something outside of my "MARK-box", I would be game. If you're interested.

Not a problem, I really enjoyed it and I would like to read more.