ext_67229 ([identity profile] citron-presse.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] slybrunette 2010-10-01 11:25 pm (UTC)

This is really stunning. I love how the style absolutely pulls you in, but creates slight distance at just the right moments. It's very effective and beautifully done and very subtle because, even though I could admire the style, I felt the whole time as though I was observing real life. Everything is delicate and detailed and raw, deeply in character, and very, very true.

I loved it. I'm looking forward to the next part. Oh, and the the last section, especially the last line are incredible.

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