(This is "babyrocket" from Tumblr, FYI).

Giiirl, this was my first introduction to your fics and your style is amazing. The line breaks were perfection. If I pointed out every line, every phrase that I loved, it would encompass the entire story. Everything about this worked and worked perfectly. Your characterization is spot-on. There is so much to say but I'm currently too amazed to formulate anything into proper critiques. Guh.