Poor Shannon. I love the imagery of these two fish and how perfectly you captured them in relation to Shannon's artistry in dance and her desire for what eludes her. I really feel her loneliness and her pain; I also like that on the island, Shannon at least got to have Vincent for awhile. It ties into your fic very nicely. :) Loved it!
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Date: 2008-01-22 12:18 am (UTC)