I loved this; it's really close to what I think will happen. Or that I would like to see happen. Only I think it would be cool if it was just Richard and his people behind this- though maybe, if you wanted to think so, I think you could say that there were hints that Richard could be lying in this story.
I really loved the ending. It sounds like something that really sets up for events to come, like something she would actually think and have to be prepared for then. I liked Richard in this too, and I think the traces of Richard/Alex worked. It wasn't too much, which was good, because then it would have just been one, weird for me, and two, taken away from the initial story. I like how he handled her being there, how he spoke about her past and tried to guide her. I can't wait to be able to see more from Richard, Alex, and even Ben in the show. Great job!
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Date: 2008-03-24 02:55 am (UTC)I really loved the ending. It sounds like something that really sets up for events to come, like something she would actually think and have to be prepared for then. I liked Richard in this too, and I think the traces of Richard/Alex worked. It wasn't too much, which was good, because then it would have just been one, weird for me, and two, taken away from the initial story. I like how he handled her being there, how he spoke about her past and tried to guide her. I can't wait to be able to see more from Richard, Alex, and even Ben in the show. Great job!