Your opening, with her seeing the deep scratches in the wood is rather chilling. (*obediently thinks of coffins*) I like the crowd of them being there, yammering among themselves and talking to Claire even though they know they're not supposed to, and I like that you pulled the idea of the Whispers into it. How sweet that Charlie gets her away from the others and shows her how to get out. Great work.
*wonders what planet I was away on to have missed this*
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Date: 2008-09-10 12:49 am (UTC)Your opening, with her seeing the deep scratches in the wood is rather chilling. (*obediently thinks of coffins*) I like the crowd of them being there, yammering among themselves and talking to Claire even though they know they're not supposed to, and I like that you pulled the idea of the Whispers into it. How sweet that Charlie gets her away from the others and shows her how to get out. Great work.
*wonders what planet I was away on to have missed this*