Yeah, it seems like it's going nowhere. It reads like bad fic I guess, OOC, but the end is supposed to change that. I'm glad it did, and that it made sense but was still surprising.
I'm so relieved that you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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Re: oh, clever!
Date: 2008-07-25 10:28 pm (UTC)I'm so relieved that you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!