No, it doesn't read like mine at all. The 'themes' are similar obviously, because we both understand him in the same way... but, to be honest, I think yours is darker? Maybe. It's hard to know for sure because I only know how mine reads from the author's perspective and not the reader's perspective (duh!). So yeah, I think yours is darker or more... raw? and mine is, maybe... sadder? More... desperate? I dunno.
When you do think it's safe to read mine, I'll be interested to know what you think the difference in emotion is and if I'm on the right track.
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Date: 2010-10-01 01:05 am (UTC)When you do think it's safe to read mine, I'll be interested to know what you think the difference in emotion is and if I'm on the right track.
(Also, yours is infinitely more realistic! Haha!)
And yeah... that last line? Killed me.