Unbelievably powerful. All of it, especially the parts in ()s, are just pure genius. And oh dear, the last line!!! It comes with such an impact, precisely because how true it feels to this character in that moment. You absolutely nailed it. And that first section? LOVE IT. The show messed up big time. THIS is how it should be done!
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Date: 2010-10-01 09:28 pm (UTC)FANTASTIC. Can't wait for the second half!