prompting time

[slybrunette]

To celebrate my newfound freedom:

PROMPT ME:

fandom | pairing | song lyric

(Fandoms: Grey's Anatomy, The Big Bang Theory, Lost; also making exceptions for Dead Like Me, Oz, BSG)

Last time I got through the first half-dozen; this time it is my goal to surpass that.

And...go!

ETA: Prompting closed. Thanks for playing.

Total Finished: 4/19 and counting

Comments

There was very little fight left in Jack.

[crickets.livejournal.com]

Holy crap. My love for this is overflowing. Like a fic!love waterfall! Seriously. I adore the addition of the second part and the manner in which you used the prompt and the detail of the paint at the end, AND are you serious? How could you have felt anything but positive about this?

This line? There was very little fight left in Jack. Just kind of breaks my heart a little. But the idea of him just being able to rest, to have the quiet and comfort you paint in both of these scenarios is so amazing.

You just get better and better and always surprise me with your stories and even your sentence structure. (No really there are so many times when I go "Oh I LOVE how she worded that.") WHY are you not writing in this fandom anymore? Cause you do it so well.

I keep wondering about the symbolism of that paint splatter. A merging of two worlds. Hmm.

You're my hero. You know that right?

Re: There was very little fight left in Jack.

[slybrunette.livejournal.com]

The original plan here was to do the first part. Except I couldn't figure out an ending to it. And in came the second part. By the time it was done, I didn't know if it was genius or contrived or somewhere in between.

I did do the sparse thing you told me to a month or two ago. Or I tried. There's exposition that's gone from this, and I think maybe it's better that way you know? It kind of makes me want to write in the fandom again but at the same time I never have any ideas of my own. Maybe one of these days.

You're onto something with the paint splatter m'dear.

I'm so freaking glad you liked this! Thanks for reading and reviewing!